To prezntime: Hi Chris
 

Thank you for your kind efforts and frankness for such a detailed comment.
You may be right, the punch lacks.
Sometimes, or maybe almost always, I take much care and time for the graphical side of the composition.For me the balance of composition is important. I would maybe get closer but I instinctively wanted to balance the long lines of the tower with the vertical lines of the bodies.
For me it's quite a good composition. I am a little bit sad about the lacking impressiveness.Anyway, I can't change it any more.
Thanks again and best wishes from Vienna.
Murad