Etike 2007-06-12 11:33
Szia János,
I've been looking at this collection for a while now, and I positively like the last piece, it represents to me the modern factory area and this is fine. I'm not so sure about the precpective distortion stemming from the use of your wide-angle lens. Poles and walls lean into the photo in a somewhat unattractive way. In my view it would be better to use a focal length of approximately 50mm (around the middle of your zoom) and compose some details of the building a bit more carefully. Sometimes less is more and I think showing some details of the building would reveal more of its character.
Réka
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