edal 2006-04-16 3:57
Hi, Dario!
I like your church very much as an example of ancient architecture and as an example of good focus and color. The explanatory note is very good too! The problem with the wire is very annoing and you have mastered it... But the brown leaves with the green trees?! Unnecessary, I think.
As a whole - OK!
TFS
Anton
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04-18-2006, 05:26 AM
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To edal: Hi! :)
Well, you're right on the issue about the leaves. In fact, I took several other shots without them, and the Church looks so gorgeous as it is. But I preferred this one with gargabe and brown leaves as a way to depict the abandon and poor maintenance of the plaza and the whole thing.
That's the weird thing about the composition as a whole: How can it be a wonderful and nice Church in that ugly situation? With practically no one taking care of it? Thanks for commenting! 
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