eleparc 2004-09-11 3:32
angela, i like this shot very much! i like the composition going from the top left down to the right with this group almost a triangle, i like the vivid tone of red a,d the overall attitude of this bunch of kids.. two flaws for me tough : all feet were cut , but this is acceptable for me, and above all, i hate this postcard type framing. it is so strong that my attention is diverted from the image. it would deserve a simpler frame, without a text. A real pity !
i tried a ws to get rid off this.. hope you'll like too;-)
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09-11-2004, 01:04 PM
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To eleparc: Thank you very much !
I'm really appreciate for your valuable suggestion and willing to spend your time for my photo!Regarding the frame,I agree with you,
it does look better with simpler frame~:) and about the feet,because I was across the street and was with the 70-300mm lens,so it is a pitty that I couldn't got a wider angle for this photo. Thank you very much for reminding me,and I'll pay more attention on the overall composition. Best Regards, Angela 
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