after hours, a photo from Western Cape, West

Photographer's Note

Taken in Techno Park - a business park just outside Stellenbosch.

I'm not sure if the tree should be in the middle or maybe a bit to the right? Also the focus seems to shift between the tree, sun and building - is it good or bad if you𠆫e not fixated on one thing when you look at a photo?

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greg64g (11193) 2005-09-16 4:00

Hello Gert

Superb picture, colors are incredible and so wonderful, well concerning the tree i am not sure, but hte one on the center is the best one.
cheers
greg

Lukasso (645) 2005-09-16 14:03

I love such compositions. Warm tones, nice subtle light. Great thing to watch. What annoys me a little is the emptyness on the left side. I wish there was something more than water and skies. Those bushes arer to small, they don't capture my attention. Neverthless I like your photo!

maya (0) 2005-09-19 1:54

Very nice shot Gert. Colors, shadows and light, my kind of photo. Congratulations.

rbcy1974 (20758) 2005-09-21 9:38

Hi Gert,
What a beautiful view od this tree. I do think that maybe cropping of a bit on the right would look nicer, but the colours, sky and compositiona re still great. Amazing to think that this is outside a bussiness park,
Regards
Daniel