GRAZING, a photo from West Bengal, East

Photographer's Note

This is another common scene in rural West Bengal. This was shot from a moving train.

This is the repost as a few members did not like the earlier one. It is unprocessed. Will someone do a workshop on this one?

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stiginthedump (1833) 2007-10-02 0:25

I commented on the past one. I'm glad our comments were able to persuade you to repost it. Others will have different ideas of what to do with this one, but I think it would look better if you cropped off the blue pole in the background, and just keeping the cows, the woman, and the green grass. Add a little extra sharpening and a frame, and viola!

I'm at work at the moment so can't do a workshop, but i'll do one when i get home to show you what I'm talking about.

Thanks

prumod (8300) 2007-10-06 10:38

hi somak...
very nice shot of a bengal village... very lovely village scene... your shot is as simple as the village life... it's very pure!
greetings...

Angshu (56760) 2008-05-07 0:52

Hello Somak
I agree with Will here about the crop of the top part. The FG is good & fairly sharp & I think a pass with colours, contrast & some more sharpness would do rather well. But Full marks for the compo. done from a running train!
Regards
Angshu