"yOsSi", a photo from Jakarta Raya, Java

Photographer's Note

This is my friend in office. I like to take her picture, becoz she so nice and kindness to be my model. She also coorperate.

Nobody has marked this note useful

Critiques | Translate

yorick (87) 2004-10-25 13:18

Like it as a casual portrait. The angle adds a dynamic element, and the eyes are good, not looking straight into the camera. Limited range of colours adds to the impact - have you tried it in monochrome?

[2]

kinginexile (2598) 2004-10-25 14:00

And, reading you, maybe you like her just a little bet?
Just teasing you, Pagin.

She is an attractive woman, and you caught her in an interesting "between moods" pause. Seems she is wondering "OK, now, what do i do?"

WALTERito (351) 2004-10-25 15:04

VeRy nIcE... er... suBJect !
THe posE is aS tHouGH sHe'S waITIng FoR tHE RighT mOmEnt tO shOOt. ThE tILTing suGGestS AcTioN.
TO iMPRoVe tHE SKiNtoNeS aNd cOLOurS I madE a WS
;-)

[workshop] [compare]

Bluejeans (64251) 2004-10-25 15:39

Bonito retrato

scalerman (26900) 2004-11-28 19:06

nicely captured and i like your angled crop. beautiful model too.