Clay Pots, a photo from Kuala Lumpur, West

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Traditional Clay Pot dining, in the allys of China Town, Kula Lumpur.

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BAKO (1691) 2005-07-06 13:33

Hello Ahmet,
welcome to TE :)
with a nice photo.

why u did not crop out this pipe at the bottom ?

Regards

BAKO

ameyer (47) 2005-07-06 15:49

Very unusual color. Very interesting, intent, face. Usually I don't like tilted photos, but this one works. Tilting the scene and making the cook upright has an interesting effect.

joseelias (0) 2005-07-06 17:19

Hi Ahmed! Welcome to TE!

This is a very nice photo! Full of dynamic, because of the man𠏋 blurred action and the tilt, very expressive due to his face and captivating by the strong and unusual colors. Did you do any work on the colors?

A 15 pixel black border would turn this image even stronger as it would reinforce the colors and increase our focus in the scene. Still, the use of a frame depends on the personal taste.

nofer (3205) 2005-07-06 17:34

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Welcome to Trek Site..!!!
Good picture to begin.
Continue....

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bnallama (3763) 2005-07-06 17:50

Selamat Petang Ali. Apa Khabar? Selamat datang ke TE.
A nice photo with lovely lightand atmostsphere. Any PP. I like it a lot. Bala

kclai (2267) 2005-07-07 0:17

Selamat Pagi, Ahmed
First of all, welcome aboard.
next, a good start in Te with such unique post. It's truely a good picture but there's room for improvement.
Such as the angle or level for the shot. try to make the level as part of the photo.
The focusing, well, that's the dilema. Whether to keep the claypot as the main subject or the claypot vendor.
Well done.
Eric Lai

mkonjilp (375) 2005-07-07 19:35

This is an awesome picture. The colors and angle are perfect. I know a photo is good when it makes me want to go somewhere, and this does just that.

erdna (5713) 2005-07-07 21:16

Good POV and composition Ahmed. The food must be good by the number of people eating.

Andre'

chaity (1539) 2005-07-08 4:12

Hai Ahmed, welcome to TE.
What a photo to start in TE. Like the blue background and the fire. Nice capture of this ordinary life.

cak (4931) 2005-07-16 16:09

beatifull pic ali. whatkind of material are there in this food?
what is yourjob?

zeus (1462) 2005-11-23 7:16

I like you got the picture having this contrast between the blue and the fire. also the whoole composition is interesting...as other user said, explore more the notes and let people understand more about the picture. In this case you should explain a bit more about this food. and also technics to take the picture.