Photographer's Note
In the middle of the chaos of Manila, she sat at an adjacent table to mine at an outdoor cafe. Pondering, meditating, reflecting - a human oasis of calmness and peace.
It was a totally candid point-and-shoot portrait and the obscuring object in the bottom-right does detract, but on the whole I think it works well.
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postvikram
(1199) 2006-03-08 18:33
Rew,
I agree A human oasis of calmness and peace.Nicely captured.the obstructing white line does not matter.
A kind of clarity of thought and concentration reflects on her face.TFS - Vikram
pablominto
(53746) 2006-03-09 1:38
Hello Rew,
Let me guess... she is texting!
Good portrait, nice candid shot with good colours and details...
Maybe I'd crop some behind her and give her more space in front?
Regards,
Pablo -
peter1892
(1681) 2006-08-07 18:37
Hi Rew - just looking through some of your earlier postings & I came across this. I think you've nailed the DOF here, it's really good. The bottom right portion is a little distracting, I'd suggest a minor crop to remove the person on the extreme right (bare skin & black top), good shot other than that.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Rew Shearer (rewshearer)
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- Genre: 人物
- Medium: 彩色
- Date Taken: 2005-11-00
- Categories: 日常生活
- Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ20, LEICA DC VARIO-ELMARIT 1:2.8/6-72 ASPH.
- Photo Version:Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2006-03-08 18:10
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