Children of a fishermen's family, a photo from Dong Nai, South East

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Children of a fishermen's family in the Tri An lake

Floating houseboat in the Tri An lake
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http://www.trekearth.com/gallery/Asia/Vietnam/photo296744.htm

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calvinc (88) 2006-01-06 1:26

Great colors and depth of field. I would've done it a little differently with the composition though. I feel like the left 1/3 of the photograph is a little empty, so I cropped it out in a workshop. After doing so, I noticed that my eyes more readily focused on the childrens' faces. And even more so, my eyes couldn't help but shift back and forth between the two. So maybe cropping out the "dead space" helps to keep my eyes from drifting away from the emotion.

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vapours (8264) 2006-01-06 3:26