Vision sur la puerta del sol, a photo from Madrid, Madrid

Photographer's Note

Sur la puerta del sol, la vision forte d'une femme 幨嶲ante sous le charme du bus Madrid Vision!!

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bernardec (2241) 2009-07-13 1:29

Nali

La porte du soleilvoil� bien un titre qui convient
au futur des choses...
message bien re蓰
jolies couleurs et superposition r徼ssie des personnages et du bus qui passe
SLY

Berni

cobbydale (1958) 2009-08-26 2:26

Hola Nalitiana, you have chosen an interesting subject for this shot and have some vibrant colours. Also the lighting is good.

You said you were looking for feedback as you learn to use your new Nikon D60 (good choice by the way!) so I would say with this shot, the main thing I notice is the focussing. You have a medium F stop (F11) and there is no area that is sharply in focus except maybe just the man on the right. It might have been better to either go for a higher depth of field (maybe F22)and have most of the shot in focus, or a low one (maybe F5) and have both the men in focus and the bus blurred (or vice versa).

I hope that helps and I'm sure you'll love your new camera.

cheers
Leon