Photographer's Note
The Shelush house in Neve Zedek,a beautifull old house named after the familly which holds that name.
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Aegean
(2571) 2003-08-12 3:51
Very pleasant shot Rafi...I love the lighting and framing...The contrast between inside and outside light is captured perfectly! Very well done...
Edwin
(188) 2003-08-12 4:09
I always fall for diagonals, and just like in this shot I find plenty of them forming a attractive and dimension rich composition. I like your choice of angle here, since it reveals details from both the inside and the outside of this old house. My only suggestion here would be to use a adjustable polaroid filter to reduce the reflection in the windows.
Mike
(693) 2003-08-12 17:59
As always, a good shot Rafi, the white sky spoils it a bit, I'd be tempted to either crop it away or do a bit of PS work on it to add a gradient effect, should be very easy with the edges being so well defined.
thien
(2112) 2003-08-12 20:11
What pulls me inside in this picture is the inside of the house and very good observation, Rafi. I would probably concentrate on it and make a straight on shot with tight framing around the windows.
I see you haven't got the tripod yet :)
dannyc7
(358) 2003-08-14 6:46
good, warm, ''penetrating'' picture.the name should mean something to you
Photo Information
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Copyright: Rafi Carmon (forlife)
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- Genre: 地方
- Medium: 彩色
- Date Taken: 2003-07-29
- Categories: 建築
- Exposure:f/3.5
- Photo Version:Original Version
- Theme(s):Doors and Windows, Neve Tzedek [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2003-08-12 3:47