Morning canoe ride, a photo from Quebec, Central

Photographer's Note

Beginning of a hot day - what better way to start but with a canoe ride when the sun is just beginning its job.
Temperature went up to 34C that day.

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Timmok (802) 2005-06-28 12:16

Hi Norman,

The colours are very beautiful and the idea of the reflect of these colourfull people on the water is very good. Yet, if you allow me to, I will try to make a constructive remark on the composition.

I'm a bit concerned by the framing as the lake shore is in the middle of the picture, and the canoe is almost in the center. You should maybe have shown more of the mountain and less of the water. Moreover, as they are going towards the right of the picture, it would have been nice to put more emphasis on where they are paddling to, than where they come from...

I hope you don't mind these remarks...