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Photographer's Note

...."Dorothy's Barn - IV"....

Fourth in the series --

I liked the "Old Aged" detail of this image - the rope blowing in the wind (with the fine detail in the fraying of the ends - showing in the shadows and the blackness of the broken window).

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Many thanks, to our neighbor, Dorothy, for letting me do this series on her property.
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Thanks, so much, to everyone for looking in to my gallery and special thanks to all who leave thoughts, ideas and comments - Larry
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ISO 80 - 1/320 @ F 4.0 - Sony H2 - Carl Zeiss 2.8-3.7/6-72 - Free Neat Image

jhm, dareco, gunbud, cunejo200, Dyerco, penny12, josepmarin, shevchenko, Floydian has marked this note useful

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jhm (202939) 2009-05-04 9:21

Hello Larry,

Another a picture of Dorothy's Barn, these barn is very old and shall during a storm once disappear.
The glass of the window are disappeared, the cord of the door is broken, it wood not maintain.
You picture is very sharp and clear, also the colour and details are very nice.
This all gives a little bit spooking feeling, good for a horror movie.
Very well done, TFS.

Have a nice workweek,
John.

rodgerg (55767) 2009-05-04 9:45

Hello Larry,

An another minimalis but very efficience sight. An excellent framing well selected and an image full of technic qualities. Good an original photowrk.
Have agood evening,
Roger

dareco (17136) 2009-05-04 14:39

Such a lovely series!! Original work. Nice composition once again and very good lighting and detail. TFS

Fis2 (155573) 2009-05-04 15:28

Witaj Larry!
I love the windows ;)
Good POV and composition.
Interesting colors.
Good work.
Regards
Krzysztof

gunbud (34066) 2009-05-04 19:25

Hi Larry,
Love this somber view that wonderfully conveys the how harsh the elements can be on an old wooden barn.
Very clear colors and sharp details to this fine image.
Regards, Tom

Jonathan_Tree (0) 2009-05-05 2:42

Hello Larry!
Mysterious window. Good shot. Good contrast and sharp.
Cordially!

Greg1949 (9011) 2009-05-05 6:02

Nice one Larry, you're right this is the best of the bunch. Detail is really superb and the subtle color shifts are wonderfully realized. Great work.

Greg

cunejo200 (7281) 2009-05-05 9:42

Hey Larry,
Thanks for the welcome. I had been away on vacation and it is a chore sorting out photos after a two-month trip. Lovely details and texture of this composition. The supspended rope and the window with the broken glass are special highlights. Best regards...Danilo

Dyerco (10185) 2009-05-05 10:32

Hi Larry
Very well exposed with marvellous textures and subtle colours in the wood, metal and rope.
Phil

Waylim (25436) 2009-05-05 12:46

Larry,
Just and old beat up barnes and you make it looks beautiful with good composition, and nice light and colors. Very down to earth kind of charm. Thanks
Way

gildasjan (43826) 2009-05-05 23:52

Bonjour Larry
Le temps est pass� par l�.Cette image cr嶪 une atmosph鋨e tr鋊 particuli鋨e avec ce morceau de corde semble-t-il pouss� par le vent.
Bonne journ嶪
Amicalement
gildas

danyy (0) 2009-05-05 23:53

Bonjour Larry,
un sujet simple bien trait� avec un rendu impeccable des couleurs; lumi鋨es et textures.
Regards.
Daniel.

trekks (14348) 2009-05-06 7:56

hi Larry

Attention to details or abstract is a good part of training in photography because you can isolate and form a POV in so many configurations that you can imagine.

This is a good example of what endless possibilities you can do with a barn house. It is sharp and showing nice detail of the wall texture and shot in good light control.

Nice work.

tfs, bill

penny12 (132) 2009-05-06 9:30

Hi Larry,
I particlarly like your series ''Dorothy's Barn'' and this is another good shot.
Artistic view, good sharpness, great industrial-like colours. I like the rope; it adds an extra something.
Well done,
Penny

Nicou (193806) 2009-05-07 0:39

Hello,

Quelle belle fen皻re, avec cette corde, ce graphsime de bois, avec de merveilleuses couleur, le bois a bine 彋幦 us� par le temps, mangigiuqe.

bravo et amiti�

Nicou

swiatopelk777 (0) 2009-05-07 10:10

Hi Larry!
Wonderful window. Good capture. Very good contrast and sharpness. Nice light.
Greetings from Poland!

josepmarin (59385) 2009-05-07 12:52

Hi Larry,
The dynamic effect created by the rope blowing in the wind is fantastic.
I like how it is outlined on the old wood of this barn and the window with the broken glasses.
It is a composition that combines simplicity and a lot of graphical strength.
A good work.
Friendly regards,
Josep

pablominto (53746) 2009-05-11 2:15

Hello Larry,

Fine architectural details, and the broken window shows the situation and present state of things!
Well framed view with fine texture in the wooden wall, and the elements are well arranged...
And the rope blowing in the wind adds to the mood..!

Greetings,
Pablo -

shevchenko (20560) 2009-05-11 19:05

Hi Larry,
Clear to show damaged window and wooden wall, good color and lighting, dark interior add contrast to the bright corner too, distinct photo, thanks for sharing a selected part of the farm house.
Ally

izmirli (3989) 2009-05-16 16:30

merhaba my friend larry
how are you?what are you doing?
wonderful composition and good idea.excellent colours.well done.
best regards.
g僡kan ak蓷kır.

Floydian (30970) 2009-05-25 5:27

Hi Larry,

The bicycle shot can't be improved, but i also like this one a lot from your series. How the winds plays with the old rope and how it leans in front of the broken window. It's old and rusty and i think you did really a great job on this serie...like this one a lot.

Take care,

Henk