School Bus, a photo from Arizona, West

Photographer's Note

Taken at Papago Park in Phoenix. Just saw the school bus and took this picture on a whim. I did some sharpening with PS's unsharp mask, but I didn't know what else to do to improve the picture

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snuggleaphagus (4146) 2004-02-01 2:45

I like these colors and how you captured the reflections on the windows. I repeaded pattern interrupted by the bus. It appears a bit tilted to me. It's wonderful how you saw the artistic possibilities on an everyday occurence.

bethvee (6) 2004-02-01 2:49

wonderful shot, i love the contrast between the sky and the bus. i would adjust the contrast just a bit so that the "school bus" part stands out a little more.

maciekda (19895) 2004-02-01 11:12

I like it, all those colors and this strange composition, I think you should have decided whether you want to include those light at the bottom or not, now we see parts of them... anyway, very sunny shot

Tim (469) 2004-03-30 19:17