Girls of Ipanema, a photo from Rio de Janeiro, Southeast

Photographer's Note

Two girls on the Ipanema beach. Look at the the man on the right starting at them

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supereira (9576) 2004-09-25 5:19

I like the colors and the contrst between them.Good POV,framing and prespective.

aella (117) 2004-09-25 11:36

Nice picture, but it feels a little tilted. At first I thought the image could benefit from a rotation, then I realized the horizon is indeed straight - it's the sand that slopes up to the left or the perspective that suggests it. Still, that's a little unsettling.

Also, maybe a cropping would be nice if you want to focus the scene on the girls and the man watching it.

I've suggested a workshop.

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Cathy (335) 2004-10-15 23:49

I love the blue, blue ocean and the layout of the photo (the girls on the left and the mountain and the man on the right.

Well done.

I look forward to seeing more of your pictures on TE

mdchachi (1612) 2004-11-03 8:53