in the window, a photo from Miranda, West

Photographer's Note

This is a children from an orphanage in Caracas. Went there to distribute some donations we received and found her in the middle of the playground inside a wooden house with slides and so.

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Note: critics and comments are well appreciated.

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drt100 (4038) 2008-09-17 21:03

A very beautiful young girl scene. This photo has a very good (POV), rich colors (saturation, contrast, and gamma great), and sharpness. You will gain more notes points if you write more about your work. Good comments such as your feeling about the photo and the place the photo is taken helps. (TFS) Thanks for Sharing - David

dArpAn (499) 2008-09-17 23:52

Gabriel- That's a really cute glance. Apart from the other good things abt ur shot, I specially love the blur on her hand- such images are dead without a hint of motion. One thing- I found the 'pink' board at the lower right corner a bit distracting, It could be cropped IMHO...

Rgds,
Darpan

batalay (41261) 2008-09-18 2:27

Hello Gabriel,

People � adults or children � framed in open windows always make compelling photographs. I like this portrait of the little girl, with the red window shutters and the worn-out clapboard immediately setting off the child. Bravo,
Bulent